Our Trip To Rotorua

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How will I know I am successful:
Using descriptive words such as adjectives and adverbs
Using figurative language like simile, metaphor, onomatopoeia, alliteration,
Chronological order (In order of events happening)
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Our trip to Rotorua 2013!

“Its friday morning and we are heading of to rotorua today at 3:00, but derwing that time we have to pack! We are staying for three  nights and 4 days I cant wait! yay its 12:00 already and we are just having lunch at a cafe i am having a chicken and lettuce wrap with mao in it.

  (YUMM) and mum is having a pasta dish with chicken! And what we're drinking?

well mums having a coffee and me i’m having a hot chocolate! (YUMM) “Oh we are leaving the cafe and we are now going home to get our gear. Wait a  minute its its its 2:00! already! yayy we are packing the car up and we are going to go pick simon (My step dad) up from work then we are going to start driving to ROTORUA! yaay! “Poor! we just hit taupo to a stinky start yuck! as we are passing through taupo im getting even more excited because we are almost there yaay.

One hour latter…... we are  in Rotorua yay oh poo maybe not so yay it STINKS! oh im still excited though. Wait u nuff of the talking we've stopped and guess what we are at the motel we are going to stay in yay i am so exited and the motel has stairs and that's awesome as yay I can't stop saying say thank you mum I say this is  awesome!

When we arrived we got settled and then we went and got some dinner and we had Chinese and I had fried rice The first night we get to use the spa pool yay its so cool having a indoor spa pool in a hotel! as I hop in the spa I feel my feet burning in the water but i'm starting to get used to the water now as i'm starting to get right in the water I feel my whole body burning but its not that bad.

But it sucks because there is no roff were the spas is and u can still smell the gas its gross! After we had a swim in the spa pool we watched TV then I went to bed. When I woke up we had to have breakfast as usual and then we had to think about leaving and getting some lunch on the way home.