HFNZ Ad

Here is our ad for our policy group in class that me Tyler,Natasha and Bianca made! I hope you like it :)

 Advertisement reflection

How did we grab people’s attention right from the beginning?

We started to make ads so that people might chose to become healthy.

Was our content relevant to our political party policies?

Yes because we made appropriate policies for our party.

How did we give our audience a good idea about what our policies are?

We gave them good advice about eating healthy.

How was our ad value for money?

292,500

What was successful about our ad?

We made people recognize that we will make them healthier than they are.

If we could change anything what would we do differently next time?

Make our ads all have our logo on them and make them better.

What skills will I need to improve on to do this?

try harder to make the ads and make them on paper and photocopy

them to get more to save money.

Make sure you justify all your answers. A simple yes  or no is not good enough.

Our ad

that we

need to

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Y Chart

Here is the lazy Lemons y chart that we created a while ago but i hope u like our work! :D

Exposition On Having A Printer

In writing we have been doing expositions here is mine on a classroom printer. 

Success Criteria             Each paragraph has its own point relevant to the topic, trying to persuade the reader. Paragraphs start with a topic sentence engaging the audience. Elaborating on the points in each paragraph. The conclusion gives advice for the future, links to the introduction. Use describing words and figurative language. Fix all known spelling mistakes and punctuation errors.

                                                                              

      

I am trying to persuade Mr Ellis to buy every class a printer because it would be good for the class to have a classroom printer.

          

I think we should have a classroom printer because then we don’t have to go running to the printer in the rain and that way the piece of paper won’t get wet from the rain because when u get your piece of paper gets wet it will get ruined and then the wet paper will create a hole and make a mess.

I also think we should have a classroom printer because then we don’t have to leave the class and stop learning and if we had a classroom printer we only have to walk a few steps to it. If we had a classroom printer we don’t have to wait until the teacher gets it for us or wait until Bianca comes back with it and then we could just get it.

I think Mr Ellis should get every class a printer.

Leonardo Da Vinci

Here is my second change maker on Leonardo Da Vinci I hope you like it :)

William Shakespre-Change maker

For inquiry we have been resurching change makers and here is my first change maker. I hope you like it :)